支招小作文(178)I動態(tài)餅工作人士不同活動的時間分配

March 21, 2024雅思小作文系列 | 欄目推送說明分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經(jīng)由專業(yè)團隊反復(fù)校對，最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復(fù)一日那一點點小小努力的積累。[2024/ 3/ 16] The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.【主體段分段】：方法1：按照<時間>分段 （本篇文章按照此種分段方式）方法2：按照<趨勢>分段Body 1：working，relaxing，travelling一段【整體上升趨勢】Body 2：going out，sleeping, others一段【下降趨勢&平穩(wěn)】【開頭段】The pie charts illustrate changes in the proportion of time that working adults spent on different activities in 1958 and 2008.【概述段】It is clear thatin both years, workingaccounted for the largest percentageof time,whilethe surveyed people spent the least proportion of time on commuting.Also, the figure for going out witnessed the most dramatic change.思路要點：- 兩年中working占比都最高，但travelling to work占比都最低- going out變化最急劇【Body 1】Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatin the initial year, 33% of the time was allocated to working,closely followed bythe figure for sleeping(32%).By contrast,people onlyspent 2% of their time oncommuting. Going outtook up19% of a day, and this figurewas more than twice the figure forrelaxing at home. The proportion of time distributed to other activities such as hobbies and playing sports was 6%.思路要點：1958年- working占比33%，sleeping緊隨其后占比32%- travelling to work占比僅為2%- going out占比19%，是relaxing at home的兩倍多- others占比6%【Body 2】In the year 2008, the proportion of time people spent on working and relaxing at homesaw a remarkable rise to42% and 13% respectively.The most drastic change could be found inthe time allocated for commuting,with the figure growing by4 fold.By contrast,there was a sharp decline inthe percentage of time distributed to going out and sleeping by 13% and 7%.In this year,people still spent 6% of their time on other activities.思路要點：2008年- working和relaxing at home：顯著上升- travelling to work：變化最急劇，上升了4倍- 對比而言，going out和sleeping急劇下降- others不變